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TITLE: It moves in....
By deeksha bhatia
11/13/06
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meybe another way to crack the code of mysterios life. Feedback is eagerly awaited. Please let me know of my drawbacks.
The first cry here,
The last breath there.

A novel stage here,
A sad departure there.

Love of the nears and dears here,
Treachery by the loved ones there.

Some new friends here,
An unanswered hostility there.

Revelation of feelings here,
Unexpressed sensations there.

A frustrated soul here,
A contented man there.

Reality accepted here,
And so is there.

Same is the summit
Where two people stand.

And
The life moves on its way
As enigmatic, as mysterious as ever.
Yeah, it moves on.
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