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TITLE: The Return
By Kevin Camps
12/08/04
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Written from Hosea 14:1-7. It is a plea to God for him to restore us back to him after the people of God turned away from him. On a corporate level we often turn from God to seek other things. Please offer your response and thoughts.
O Lord we will return to you
We will say take away our iniquity
We come before you broken, receive us graciously
We will render unto you the sacrifice of our lips
Totally depending on you
This a plea for your control

We will return

Heal our faults and love us freely
Turn your anger from us
Turn to us as the dew in the morning
Expand your roots in our trust
Beautify us will the oil of the olive
As we return to your presence

We will return

We will dwell under your shadow
We will return to your face
Lord, revive us as the grain
We will return to the place
Cause us to blossom as the vine
As we return to your name

We will return
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