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TITLE: Lay Down Your Burdens
By Sharon Jones
07/11/06
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Come to Zion.
Leave the world behind
for I am your God
and I will lead you there.
Be not afraid to lay down
your burdens at my feet.
I will comfort thee
and hold thee.
I will take thee by the hand
and we will walk together
hand in hand, side by side.
Look to Me and together
we’ll stand tall and bright.
Lay your burden at my feet
and together we’ll conquer all.
We’ll slay the dragons flame,
no more to hold you back
from the Temple.
No more to keep you from
the blessings found within.
Together we’ll cut off its head
and look no more to sin.
Take My hand and we’ll conquer all
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