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TITLE: AN ANIMAL'S PRAYER
By Patricia Leonaitis
07/06/06
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This is a prayer for a young woman with a tumor. Please think of it in that light.
Karen, I spoke to Penny poodle about you-
She barked and said, "Whatever you do,
Be sure to tell her, we are talking to Jesus too,
I'll get my friends at the zoo to speak to Him too".

So you see Karen, not just people pray for you-
But all of the animals of God kingdom do too,
And God-Who created us all in six days-
Will hear all of our voices and be truly amazed.

So Karen, don't be sad or blue,
For God is taking good care of you-
For all of the animals are praying so hard,
Those tumor cells better be on their guard.

Soon, the tumor cells will all be melted away-
Even the ones who may have strayed,
And you can think about your animal friends,
And call them all over to pat their rear-ends.

Karen, God is listening, and He will heal you.
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