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TITLE: Passage to Oblivion
By Jennifer Leonard
06/24/06
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I wrote this about my grandmother who was suffering Alzheimers disease.
You close your eyes to an unknown world,
I sit and pray for your deliverance.
Robbed of precious memories, you grasp
for some semblance of the past.
Unfamiliar faces, but once you knew,
Eyes so like your own weep quietly.
Slow, agonizing descent.
Agony rages in your listless eyes,
the passageway to oblivion.
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