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TITLE: Look at Me
By Sharon Jones
06/24/06
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This is dedicated to all of us moms or dads that sometimes get caught up in our own things and have a tendancy to tell them to wait when they want something. A good reminder to stop and look at them.
Look at me.
I’m down here.
I know you are busy,
but I need you.
I know what you are doing
is important.
But so am I.
Please stop what you’re doing
and look at me.
I need you.
You tell me you love me,
but you look over top of me.
You say my needs are important,
but you growl at me.
You get so wrapped up
in what you are doing,
I’m in the way.
Please mommy, stop,
and look at me.
I’m down here.
There you are mommy!
I love you mommy!


By: Sharon Jones
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