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TITLE: Nachos
By Sharon Jones
06/21/06
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Another something silly.
Triangles.
Pretty colors
all piled in a heap.
Melted cheese
just for these
triangles to scoop it up.
Messy
Fingers gooey.
The senses full of life.
The smell of these
colors and cheese
drives me out of my mind!
I want more!
I need more!
Guacamole, sour cream and chives
and don’t forget the salsa!
All piled on top of cheese
on top of these, triangles.
Only one left.
What will I do?!
Go get some more.


By: Sharon Jones
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