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TITLE: Thanks be to God
By Sharon Jones
06/16/06
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My heart beats so rapidly
when I think of my Father’s love.
How He sent His only Son
to pay for my sins.
To watch and know what His
Son will endure.
The pain and agony, of generations
to come.
Why did He have to suffer for me?
Why can’t I be more like Him?
Then He wouldn’t have had to suffer for me,
me and my sins.
I try with all my might.
But one thing is for sure.
I am only mortal.
It is painfully clear.
Thank you Lord Jesus
for taking on my sins.
For without your sacrifice
I would never see God again.
Thank you my Father in Heaven
for giving us your Son.
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