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TITLE: One Day
By Ricky Flowers
06/12/06
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One Day
By: Rick Flowers

One day we shall soar
Beyond the darkness of space
As our journey continues
To that wonderful place

One day we shall sing
In praise to the father
As the Angels of heaven
Bring the faithful together

We will sit at the table
With Jesus to dine
Have life everlasting
Peace for all time

One day we’ll no longer
Toil upon this earth
Thanks to God the Father
For his son Jesus birth

One day we shall soar
With the Angels on high
Without pain or sorrow
No more to die

Soon this earthly journey
Shall be over and done
After the battle
And Jesus has won

Lift up your head
And your eyes shall see
All of heavens beauty
Just beyond the sea

It’s there we shall live
In His beautiful place
Because of His love
And His amazing grace
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