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TITLE: Be My Life
By denica mac
05/02/06
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This is kind of supposed to be a song. But I don't write music, so really it's a poem.
When I wake up
I wanna feel your wind
Rushing over me
Causing me to spin.

When I read your book
I wanna take a look
At who you are
And what you did.

I wanna live, I wanna die
Why can’t I just dive
Into your deep, deep waters
And live my life for you?

Wherever I go
I want you to be there
Cause I don’t know where I’d be
Without you, oh-oh, without you

So be my life
Be my God
I’m letting go
I’m gonna join your flow.

I wanna live, I wanna die
Why can’t I just dive
Into your deep, deep waters
And live my life for you?
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