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TITLE: The miracle child God gave to me
By darlene grisham
02/03/06
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A poem of a mother who wasn't to conceive but did. Then a child was born with catastrophe and how The great physician brought us out!
I became pregnant one day
The feeling of you growing inside
was unrealistic to the world outside.

How did you conceive with infertility?
What drugs and doctors did you seek?
none, just the great physician above.

Conceiving was the easy part.
Carrying you would be hard.
For I had scars.
Lots of bedrest will keep him in,
so there I lay for 10 weeks in.

Then I had you and quickly seen,
that conceiving and carrying came easily.
It would be the raising that would be hard.

My first born son had been scarred,
scarred from hereditary genes.
My son was very ill it seems.
He will never crawl, walk, let alone run.

I refused for this to be the destiny of my son.
I once again went to my physician
and ask Lord what can I do to help?
He said just give him love and lot's of time
and after one surgery he'll be fine.
The Doctors said surgery times nine.

The first one came at 12 months old.
I thought we still had eight to go.
Then I remembered my physician said he would be fine.
He is seven now and is running everywhere
the doctors are beside theirselves.

They say a miracle I have found!
They can not explain how bones grew after birth.
All they know is it is not from this earth.
It was MY PHYSICIAN he had done his part,
but seen that we found doctors that god had gave a heart.
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