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TITLE: Eternal Regret
By Jeremy Iman
01/31/06
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this is about those people who fail to accept Christ and the regrets that will surely follow
Eternal Regret

The grim night, never giving into day
Holds claim to my emotion, deed, and thought
The guilt is mine for having never fought
To keep the end from turning out this way
Within this dark reality I'll stay
Knowing that my gun was never shot
And live with what conformity has brought
And wish those things I never dared to say

How short the hours passing between days
How tight a grip must be to keep control
Blessed are those who rightly go astray
And refuse to walk the broad and easy way
They'll find the one who's worthy to extol
Alas, the only way to save your soul
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