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TITLE: Wink
By Patrick McClure
01/26/06
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Pastels disguise
Stark architecture
Horizon fading to
Life finishing the day
At work
The heavens have worked
And need some rest
From magnificent art
Painted by the hand of God
On the canvas of the
Universe
Orange and salmon
Give way to gray
The sky’s spectrum spanning
The emotions of life
Clouds recede
The sun sets on
Puget Sound
The sound of
Nature exhaling
Planes sailing
Metropolitan life
Trying but failing
To capture
Peace and beauty
Only found on a bench
Looking towards the ocean
As God winks at me
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