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TITLE: Revival
By Deborah Adesanya
11/23/05
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Revival

I have starved without knowing
I have looked without seeing
Hungry and blind groping for anything
That gives rest
With an emptiness of pain
That is indescribable
With one cry to my soul
I find the reason why
For I have lost my love
My source, my peace
Unto my countenance, I look within
With a desire for my love
I seek with a desire, a zeal for my Lord
I ask, and He is, I seek and He is found in me
With humble repentance I return
And appreciate His love and grace
With a sweet taste of joy at the
Sense of being home
I find myself and my soul
Once again rejoices in its maker
My Lord, My Redeemer
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