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TITLE: Gods Song
By Lizanne Stockdale
09/26/05
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When your life is upside down
And the path you walk is rocky
When my truth is changed to lies
You can always give your heart to me
But first you need to listen

When my world seems cruelly tainted
And my message somehow missed
Your thoughts - they seem so clouded
You can always give your mind to me
But first you need to listen

My world is full of hardship
And the pain is oh so strong
You can always give your soul to me
But first you need to listen

I am the echo through the ages
And my spirit dwells within you
The key to me is through your heart
But first you need to listen

My son - the one who died for you
And then he rose again
To bring you peace and harmony
But first you need to listen

My language to all man is universal
And not hard to understand
There's my path that you must follow
But first you need to listen

I am the one who has the house
That only you can enter
And through my son the door will open
But first you need to listen

When you walk into my house
And sit among my faithful
When you hear my songs of praise
Only then will you have listened
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