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TITLE: You Lifted Me
By yvonne north
07/24/09
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The smallest gestures can be the greatest of gifts.
Backward and down
Backward and down
Into the blackness, tumbling and spinning
Backward and down I fall.
Backward and down
Backward and down
Darkness enfolding, fear all consuming
Backward and down I fall.
*******
Pinpoints of brightness
Pinpoints of luminance
Hope begins breathing, hands are out reaching
Pinpoints of radiance I see.
*****
Forward and up
Forward and up
Grasping and clinging, shadows receding
Forward and up I ascend.
Forward and up
Forward and up
Nothing impeding, such joy receiving
Forward and up I ascend.
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