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TITLE: pass i on
By roj miedes
05/05/09
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ah, just write your comments. They are all good for the poet's health.
when
love came to
eye
to eye
with
pain
less was more:

hallelu gave way to
jah
down was up
turned to dust
the
tree stood
still
blood spill:

He cried
eli to
jah
and wind
stood still.

and wind stood still.
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