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Discarded Shoes

by vincent lyons 
08/28/08
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In the evening still of a summer's day,
As I quietly ponder things,
My memory brings
On its fleeting wings,
Recollections of a child at play.

There's the musty smell of discarded shoes,
The soft humming of the bees;
It's so sweet to flee
To tranquility
Where my heart can fondly muse.

The remembering brings some heartfelt tears
For a mum I've never known,
And my heart still groans
For a child alone,
Even after all the years.

In the evening still of a summer's day,
I return from my sojourn;
Though her shoes are gone,
Part of me still longs
For that childhood place of play.
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LauraLee Shaw
29 Aug 2008
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LauraLee Shaw
28 Aug 2008
This is breathtaking in its beauty. Well done. One more word: KLEENEX!!!!
Linda Wright
28 Aug 2008
This poem is lovely... "The mum I've never known" makes this a bittersweet memory, but lovely just the same. Isn't it odd how certain smells can bring to remembrance certain memories and make them so vivid!
Sunny Loomis 
28 Aug 2008
Another beautiful poem. Thank you.

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