Book Navigation
  • Hire
    Writers
    Editors
  • Home
  • Read
    What's
    New
  • Join
    Faith
    Writers
  • Forum
  • My
    Account
    Login
  • Shop
    Save
    Support
  • Book
    Store
  • Learn
    About
    Jesus
Return to Content
  • Read Our Devotional
  • Opportunities to be Published
The Home for Christian Writers! Matthew 6:33

Fiction

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING
  Leave Comment   Message Writer
  Hire Writer
Report Article
  Track Writer
  Add to Favorites
Winter of the Heart, sample chapter

by Richard Hames
07/15/08
Free to Share
Author requests article critique

  Message Writer Mail
  Hire Writer

Tweet

“Anything?” Catherine asked.
“No.” Thomas replied bitterly. “She just doesn’t seem to recognise anything between us.”
“Give her time.” Catherine looked at him through big brown eyes, ringed by large glasses. These, combined with her long almost white hair gave her the appearance of a Manga character come to life.
“I’ve given her time.” Thomas said, sighing. “She’s two years older than me, almost three. What happens if she decides to settle down, and I’m not the one she does it with?”
“If it’s meant to happen, then it will happen. If it doesn’t…”
“I can’t let her go.”
“By all means, don’t let her go. Yet. But don’t hold onto her so tightly that you can’t see anything else. You don’t know if she’s the one for you, or if there’s another person out there, and you don’t want to be so blinkered that you can’t see her when she comes along.”
“You know, Catherine, sometimes you make a lot of sense.”
“I have my moments.” Catherine said, putting down her coffee cup and looking at her watch. “Shouldn’t you be getting back to work?”
“Yes, I definitely should. Bridget will have gone home by now.”
“Then she won’t be around to distract you. Try to go more than two minutes without thinking about her.”
“I’ll try.” Thomas got up from the table and walked past the retro aluminium counter, towards the plate glass doors of the café.
As Thomas walked out, Joseph was on his way in. The two of them exchanged a brief greeting before Thomas carried on his journey. Joseph ordered a coffee and sat down opposite Catherine.
“Long time, no see.” he said.
“I’ve been busy.” she explained. “Preparing for university in two months, had to make sure everything’s set.”
“We’ll be spending months apart.” Joseph held his hands over his chest, “However will I cope?”
“Your heart’s on the other side.” Catherine noted.
“You always did know the way to it.” Joseph replied. “Did I used to go to school with that guy?”
“Yes, Thomas Granger, remember?”
“Yeah, I knew I knew him. You stayed in touch, then?”
“We went on to college together, I thought I mentioned him before.”
“I don’t remember his name coming up.”
“Anyway, I help him out occasionally, give him advice, that sort of thing.”
“Ah, your speciality- making sense.”
“One of us has to.”
“You’re a barrel of laughs, Catherine. What problems is he having that you’re making go away, then?”
“I shouldn’t really talk about it.”
“Come on, you can trust me.” Catherine raised an eyebrow, “Trust may be too strong a word,” he corrected himself, “but I haven’t seen the guy in years, when am I going to see him again and tell him you talked?”
“All right, I can’t give you specifics, but it’s relationship trouble.”
“As in being in a relationship, or trying to be?”
“Trying.”
“I find that asking the girl out usually helps. In almost all cases.”
“Not this one. If he asks her out straight, she’ll run a mile. Very shy type. That’s why I’m helping him.”
“I see. So he’s pining for her from afar?”
“Yep. It’s romantic in its way, like an old-fashioned romance novel.”
“Or a chick flick. And it’s a little creepy, I wouldn’t trust a girl doing the same thing.”
“I still say it’s romantic.”
“That’s because you see good in people. You’re the trusting sort, you always see the best side in everyone.”
“Not everyone.”
“I’m hurt.” he said, “Which side did you say my heart was on?”
“With you, I can never tell.”

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BELOW LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
Reader Count & Comments
Date

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. This is especially true with articles that deal with personal healthcare and prophecy. We encourage the reader to make their own decision in consultation with God, His Word, and others as needed.

This article has been read 564 times    < Previous | Next >
Read more articles by Richard Hames or search for other articles by topic below.
Search for articles on: (e.g. creation; holiness etc.)
Read more by clicking on a link:
Free Reprints
Main Site Articles
Most Read Articles
Highly Acclaimed Challenge Articles.
New Release Christian Books for Free for a Simple Review.

God is Not Against You - He Came on an All Out Rescue Mission to Save You


...in Christ God was reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them... 2 Cor 5:19

Therefore, my friends, I want you to know that through Jesus the forgiveness of sins is proclaimed to you. Acts 13:38

LEARN & TRUST JESUS HERE

FaithWriters offers Christian reading material for Christian readers. We offer Christian articles, Christian fiction, Christian non-fiction, Christian Bible studies, Christian poems, Christian articles for sale, free use Christian articles, Christian living articles, New Covenant Christian Bible Studies, Christian magazine articles and new Christian articles. We write for Jesus about God, the Bible, salvation, prayer and the word of God.




Home  |   My Account  |   What's New  |   Site Map  |   Contact Us  |   Help  |   Blog
Monthly Newsletter  |   SITE INFO  |   Link To Us  |   Become A Member  |   Sponsors  |   ADVERTISING