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by Paul Curtis
06/09/08
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Author requests article critique

What with middle age spread
And the force of gravity
Time has played havoc
With my once sylph like body
My hour glass figure is no more
Alas it’s more like a barometer case
And my “cross your heart” bra
Is more of a “cross your waist”

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Don Beers

10 Jun 2008

Well, if it made you smile then at least somebody did. You aren't serious about "requesting a critique" are you? The title isn't spelled right and, to me, the content and intent of the work was dishonoring to our sisters. Surely you can do better than this?

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