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In His Time, and Called on the Carpet

by Holly Westefeld 
03/21/08
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In His Time

Megan stared at the stain, horrified. Hurriedly, she sent out an SOS, praying it would get through. Knowing that any reply would take time, she pragmaticly proceeded with the plan.

At the entrance to the cave, Megan peered out. When noone was looking, she slipped out and joined the crowd headed toward Jerusalem for Passover.

"Lord," she whispered, "I have come to see what you did for me. Then I'll work on the time machine.

Called on the Carpet

Young Megan stared down at the stain
In horror. How would she explain.
"No glass and no mug
Shall come near this rug.
I trust I have made myself plain."
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Glynis Becker
23 Mar 2008
Both of them are so clever and wonderfully done!
K. J. Cash
22 Mar 2008
We got a whole time travel story in 75 words. Amazing!
And I love limericks!!
Kristen Hester
22 Mar 2008
Very well done. These are so creative...and very different. GREAT job!
Lyn Churchyard
22 Mar 2008
Ooh Holly, travelling back in time to Calvary. I've often wondered if I could, would I?

Fun second piece. How often I said that to my kids ~sigh~
Hanne Moon 
22 Mar 2008
These were great, Holly! The talent in this place is amazing...everyone is doing such a wonderful job on these mini-challenges!
Tim Pickl
22 Mar 2008
I love the twist at the end of the first story!
Jan Ackerson
21 Mar 2008
Time travel! I've sometimes wondered why there isn't much good Christian time travel fiction out there--at least I've never encountered it. Maybe you should write that novel, Holly!

The limerick is so cute, including its punny title. Thanks for writing this 2nd set, and have a wonderful, blessed Easter.

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