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100 dollar bills

by Mark Frank
12/17/07
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One hundred dollar bills are temporary
Let this sink in your memory
One day you will end up in the cemetery but
One hundred born-again Christians are eternal

One hundred dollar bills are temporary
Jesus is contemporary
At times, our lifestyle is ‘military’
Defeating our soul life is obligatory and so
We thank God that He wants to save many from the hell

One hundred dollars bills are temporary
Living the Christian life the Father’s way is ‘mandatory’
Let this sink in your memory
We thank God that we live in a wonderful century and
We are glad that Jesus is no ‘mystery’

One hundred born again Christians are eternal
Jesus is our colonel
Read the journal God has left with us and
Lead a different life with or without 100-dollar bills!

Mark Frank

Copyright 2007
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Helen Dowd
17 Dec 2007
Mark, I like the strong emphais on such words as: "temporary", "memory",
"cemetery", and "eternal." Then again on "contemporary",
"‘military’", "obligatory", ending in the word "hell". You made your point strong by using more rhythmic, empatic "punching" words such as: "‘mandatory’",
"memory", "century" and
"‘mystery’"...Finally, your conclusion gave more punch words: "eternal",
"colonel", "journal," ending in the thought: "Lead a different life with or without 100-dollar bills!"...Although I can write only rhyming poetry, I like certain more modern styles such as this one. Good presentation...God bless you, Mark...Helen
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