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Love Comes Softly

by (Treava) Joyce Pool
07/10/07
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Love Comes Softly

I once heard that love comes softly.
But other than the love of God,
it has seldom come softly to me.
But I’m learning.

I’m learning to love without expectations,
to give my heart freely.
I have held you loosely in my arms,
afraid I’d crush you with my embrace.

I just love you so very much,
it hurts sometimes.
I don’t know why God chose my heart
to be so very over-full with love.

But it is full. And a big part of it is yours.
It overflows with overwhelming love.
It spills out all over the place
and not everyone wants to be bathed in the spill.

I hope that you know
you are more precious to me
than I could dare ever try to explain.
I hold you close with my heart every day.

I will hold you with it always,
even if and when you can’t return the embrace.
Someday, when your heart is overwhelmed
with the love you have for another,

perhaps you’ll know then
how it is to love you with a heart like mine.
I hold you loosely, daily,
my children, my grandchildren, my friends.

I’m truly afraid I will crush you
with more than this loose embrace.
And to crush you is something
I don’t think my tender heart could stand.

Please receive my gentle embrace.
You don’t have to open your arms to me.
I understand that not everyone feels
love so deeply in their hearts the way I do.

My love for you, for each one of you,
is so strong and I've learned that
I mustn’t expect it to be returned in full.
But I pray that it will nourish you.

My heart aches with a rare love
that I’m unsure can ever be returned,
except that I know Love
whose love is truer than even my own.

With more love than can be measured,
(doing my best to hold it in check)
I hold you loosely today.
I pray it is enough to keep you

and not so much that it drives you away.
With the silk pillow that is my heart,
I pray you'll always find it
a comforting place to lay your head

and that my love,
though so strong,
will always
come to you softly.
© Joyce Pool

Psalm 127:3

Lo,
children are an heritage of the LORD:
and the fruit of the womb is his reward.



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Helen Dowd
19 Jul 2007
My great apologies, Joyce. No, I haven't known you for a long time. I was mixing you up with another Joyce. Now I understand why I never knew you as "Treava". That is because I NEVER KNEW YOU. But I know you now and have you on as one of my "tracking people," so I will get to know you better as time goes on. Keep writing. Sorry for the mixup.... Helen
Helen Dowd
18 Jul 2007
Joyce, I have "known" you a long time (although we have never met in person). You have several poems on my website, but I just discovered a few articles ago (ahead of this one) that you write for FW. And what I don't know, and what puzzles me, is why do I not know you as "Treava," as other do? What have I missed?... Now, about your poem, I felt deep love here, a love of a mother for her child. I don't have children, so I can't relate in that respect; however, I do know what "hurting" love is. I have a hurt in my heart for a few "love-children" who probably don't love me as I do them. I am sure that is how God feels about us sometimes. Right? His love is unbounded love - a love that cannot be compared with human love.... You have written another very touching poem....Helen
Mitzi Busby
12 Jul 2007
Oh, my dear friend, this is beautiful, simply beautiful. Wow!
Thomas Kittrell
11 Jul 2007
Treava, I really don't know what to say. I am at a loss for words. This touched me deeply, for fathers love too. We all love you.
Thomas
Sharon McClean
11 Jul 2007
What can I say! This is just beautiful Treava, and I don't believe that anyone could love this way without the love of God in their hearts. I love you, Sharon
Debbie OConnor
10 Jul 2007
To say this is exquisite is an understatement. You expressed the heart of a mother for her child as perfectly as I've ever read it. And that Love is just a reflection of our Father's love for us. Awesome.
Cheri Hardaway
10 Jul 2007
I've often wondered that tender joy and ferocious love can co-exist within a parent's heart, causing us to care more deeply for another human being than perhaps we even care for ourselves. And now that my own family nest is emptying, I've wondered how to endure; for to keep them, we must let them go. You've captured that truth beautifully here. Blessings, Cheri
Peggy Yengling
10 Jul 2007
Yes, dear Treava, this IS exquisite! It's hard to keep the tears away while reading this - such beautiful emotions! To love this deeply is a gift, and even if it's not returned with the same depth, it is a joy just to FEEL and GIVE this type of love! May God bless you and guide you as you continue to nurture your loved ones and friends. As for me, I thank God for you and the caring love that flows from your beautiful heart! Love, Peggy
Jamie glaser
10 Jul 2007
when we know true Love, its easy to love others. He is the perfect example of what love should be. God holds us loosely in His hands, and waits for us to come to Him, to recieve His agape love.

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