Book Navigation
  • Hire
    Writers
    Editors
  • Home
  • Read
    What's
    New
  • Join
    Faith
    Writers
  • Forum
  • My
    Account
    Login
  • Shop
    Save
    Support
  • Book
    Store
  • Learn
    About
    Jesus
Return to Content
  • Read Our Devotional
  • Opportunities to be Published
The Home for Christian Writers! Matthew 6:33

The Word for Writers

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING
  Leave Comment   Message Writer
  Hire Writer
Report Article
  Track Writer
  Add to Favorites
Anatomies of a Poem

by Howard L. Pierce
10/23/04
For Sale
Author requests article critique

  Message Writer Mail
  Hire Writer

Tweet

SOME poems will tell a story
(With readers swept along),
As it tells about a dog named..."Shep"
Or a love...that turned out wrong.

Its meter is perfection,
With rhyme that's so precise,
A tidy little package
All wrapped...and tied up ...nice!

Another paints a picture....(Picasso set to words),
Impressive to the
Genius....
Confusing to the
Nerds!

It speaks of abstract values
With lines...that are designed...NOT to fit!
The colors clash, the subjects fight....interpretation
Is up for
GRABS!

One says, "It's SPICE." Another, "Fruit!"
(But deep inside....who gives a hoot?)

So wouldn't it be...at LEAST as good
To paint a picture....that could be understood?

As:

A man in the throes of much pain
He received being struck by a train;
Said, "If I live FOREVER,
I think I shall NEVER
Say 'WHOA' to an Iron Horse again!"

Variety? Yes! It IS there!
YOUR thoughts? They're MEANT to be shared.
When you see how they 'read'
You will learn what you need
To make 'writing'....a PLEASING affair!

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BELOW LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
Reader Count & Comments
Date
Rochelle Valasek
24 Oct 2004
This was great, Howard! I thoroughly enjoyed this!

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. This is especially true with articles that deal with personal healthcare and prophecy. We encourage the reader to make their own decision in consultation with God, His Word, and others as needed.

This article has been read 2147 times    < Previous | Next >
Read more articles by Howard L. Pierce or search for other articles by topic below.
Search for articles on: (e.g. creation; holiness etc.)
Read more by clicking on a link:
Free Reprints
Main Site Articles
Most Read Articles
Highly Acclaimed Challenge Articles.
New Release Christian Books for Free for a Simple Review.

God is Not Against You - He Came on an All Out Rescue Mission to Save You


...in Christ God was reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them... 2 Cor 5:19

Therefore, my friends, I want you to know that through Jesus the forgiveness of sins is proclaimed to you. Acts 13:38

LEARN & TRUST JESUS HERE

FaithWriters offers Christian reading material for Christian readers. We offer Christian articles, Christian fiction, Christian non-fiction, Christian Bible studies, Christian poems, Christian articles for sale, free use Christian articles, Christian living articles, New Covenant Christian Bible Studies, Christian magazine articles and new Christian articles. We write for Jesus about God, the Bible, salvation, prayer and the word of God.




Home  |   My Account  |   What's New  |   Site Map  |   Contact Us  |   Help  |   Blog
Monthly Newsletter  |   SITE INFO  |   Link To Us  |   Become A Member  |   Sponsors  |   ADVERTISING