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by Joseph O' Sullivan
11/05/13
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How much sillyness in our world of to-day,just live your life any
old way,if to-morrow don't come should we feel so glum,my own T.V.
set it is not a sage,it just shows images like a living page,
instructive and amusing,a box of tricks,and some very good flicks,
sometimes the TRUTH;comes pouring out,some GOSPELS PARABLES,to
make a person think no doubt,all written down on parchment paper,
how revelent they be about THE SON OF MAN;from who's voice they
all first began,OUR GOOD LORD'S,own words they do not age,HIS
TRUTH SPEAKS OUT;like eternity is about,this world we know will
pass away,OUR GOOD LORD,have said HIS OWN WORDS WILL STAY,and
eternity is his own any way,AMEN we must all truly pray.
Joe.
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Robin Ulbredtch
09 Nov 2013
I find this article difficult to read because of the organization and punctuation. I don't know where one rhyme begins and the next one ends. The thoughts all seem to run together in one big mixing bowl. I think the article would be easier to read and more effective if it was written as a poem instead of all the lines running together.

Keep on writing and sharing Jesus with others! I hope I'm still around when I'm 78 so I can still be writing for Jesus. May God bless you as you continue to write for Him!




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