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Oh I feel Youíve given up
As I drink from this bitter cup.
What are my sins that are so great
Do You really see me in hate?
I thought Jesus had paid the price
I thought He had made it nice.
All my life I walk in fire
Tattered clothes were my attire.
I thought Jesus was the cure
So You would see me whole and pure.
I tried to turn from my sinful ways
From the imperfections of my days.
But I keep getting cast down
I am a heap here on the ground.
Iím plagued with sinfulness
Into hell I have digressed.
Of my life I've made a mess
My sinful ways I now confess.
Helping others I will quit
This bitter herb on which I bit.
Reaching out I guess is wrong
That's what I thought of all along.
This is a dream thatís made of wood
Iíve been evil never good.
Iím being burned up in the fire
Sinking deep into the mire.
Its been a waste this pain and strife
Iím just a loser in this life.
This dreadful life for which Iíve live
I offer up and freely give.
I just thought I was being kind
I have been fooled and am so blind.
Iíll say no more Iím incomplete
I throw myself down at Your feet.
I have lost all that Youíve give
Now I donít deserve to live.
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