Book Navigation
  • Hire
    Writers
    Editors
  • Home
  • Read
    What's
    New
  • Join
    Faith
    Writers
  • Forum
  • My
    Account
    Login
  • Shop
    Save
    Support
  • Book
    Store
  • Learn
    About
    Jesus
Return to Content
  • Read Our Devotional
  • Opportunities to be Published
The Home for Christian Writers! Matthew 6:33

Poetry

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING
  Leave Comment   Message Writer
  Hire Writer
Report Article
  Track Writer
  Add to Favorites
I'm Fretful In The Garden

by William Mae
11/06/10
For Sale
Author requests article critique

  Message Writer Mail
  Hire Writer

Tweet

I ‘m Fretful in the Garden


I am fretful in the garden,
Thinks the rose now on display,
For I see my friends all leaving,
One by one they go away.
I see the mistress through the window,
The salvation for my soul,
Will she take me to her bosom,
Save me from the coming snow.

My cries to her seem silent,
I wave my petals in the air,
Keep me from my destined future,
Is my one and only prayer. 
As she’s walking through the garden,
She stands above me with a sigh,
I reach upward in the moment,
Giving out un-tempered cries.

Tender fingers grip my branches,
My thorns soften for her touch,
With a twist she saves me,
From the winters coming rush.
I feel the warmth of her bosom,
My fragrance fills her nostrils there,
Her lips gently kiss my petals,
Savoring long the kiss we share.

All the others in the garden,
With jealous eyes watch me leave,
Their destiny is coming,
They feel it in each passing breeze.
My life’s prolonged with water,
In a vase I stand up straight,
No more dew will find my petals,
For me death will have to wait.

The snow is falling I can see,
The winter’s gift it freely gives,
No ones left within the garden,
Where so many use to live.
I watch the mistress comb her hair,
Humming soft her tunes,
Her beauty dominating,
Every corner of this room.

I look past her to the mirror,
I am shocked by what I found,
My reflection so revolting,
Withered old and turning brown.
Here as soft as our first meeting,
I was lifted with a sigh,
Seeking fragrance now diminished,
From my petals that have died.

Then without one ounce of mercy,
Or a tether of regret,
Dropped me back into the garden,
Just to wait upon my death.
There the chilling winds of winter,
Instantly began to grind,
As powdered chaff for blowing,
One petal at a time. 

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BELOW LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
Reader Count & Comments
Date
Julie Pisacane
07 Nov 2010
Elegant,brilliant and very creative . Enjoyed every word, William.
I felt the toss of the discarded rose back into the garden... the sorrow of the chain of events. Love and blessings sent your way .

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. This is especially true with articles that deal with personal healthcare and prophecy. We encourage the reader to make their own decision in consultation with God, His Word, and others as needed.

This article has been read 999 times    < Previous | Next >
Read more articles by William Mae or search for other articles by topic below.
Search for articles on: (e.g. creation; holiness etc.)
Read more by clicking on a link:
Free Reprints
Main Site Articles
Most Read Articles
Highly Acclaimed Challenge Articles.
New Release Christian Books for Free for a Simple Review.

God is Not Against You - He Came on an All Out Rescue Mission to Save You


...in Christ God was reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them... 2 Cor 5:19

Therefore, my friends, I want you to know that through Jesus the forgiveness of sins is proclaimed to you. Acts 13:38

LEARN & TRUST JESUS HERE

FaithWriters offers Christian reading material for Christian readers. We offer Christian articles, Christian fiction, Christian non-fiction, Christian Bible studies, Christian poems, Christian articles for sale, free use Christian articles, Christian living articles, New Covenant Christian Bible Studies, Christian magazine articles and new Christian articles. We write for Jesus about God, the Bible, salvation, prayer and the word of God.




Home  |   My Account  |   What's New  |   Site Map  |   Contact Us  |   Help  |   Blog
Monthly Newsletter  |   SITE INFO  |   Link To Us  |   Become A Member  |   Sponsors  |   ADVERTISING