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09/11/14
Oh my goodness, how very sad. My heart is heavy.

God bless~
09/13/14
So sorry to hear about this disaster happening to Tim. Praying the Lord will comfort him.

I do think this story is more about Tim as a person than about cats and dogs. He does seem to have a greater liking to cats and the cat he had was very important to him. We will be wondering how things turn out. Blessings, LaVonne
09/13/14
Wow.

That is heartbreaking and makes me wish it wasn't a true story.
This is a truly sad story, involving the reading in such empathy for Tim. I hope he'll find God's blessings and another cat.
09/15/14
Blasted reality!~ I hope you'll give us a Paul Harvey conclusion with the rest of this story. This left me with a punch to the gut and I'm sure I'll be thinking of Tim all day. You did a good job of endearing the reader to your MC.
I must echo Sheldon - please don't leave us with bitter tears in our mouths . . .
09/17/14
I really liked your character. He was very unusual and kind of quirky. I guess that goes sometimes with being a muscician. The ending was really sad. It left me feeling really bad for him. I wanted to go buy him a new puppy! Moving my emotions when I read a story is always a good thing. Nice job!