The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 817 times
Member Comments
Hahahahaha. This was really a delight to read. Loved the ending...I smiled really wide.

Thanks. God bless~
I really enjoyed the folksy humor and your descriptions made me want to go have a pumpkin and cinnamon spiced coffee, even though I live in a hot climate! Great job!
I love all the little details you've included in here. I was sitting outside the tavern with the farmers enjoying pork pie 'n' mushy peas. Yum! You certainly kept me wondering where we were heading but I enjoyed the trip. It worked really well, weaving it around the message at the end. Expert job!
Great story, and I love the way you handled detailing the setting in the intro, nice work.
Our reputation hinges on the bumps in the road. Hmmmmm. Loved the humor and the message.
Loved the folksy humor and message. It was a creative ending and really a pleasure to read.
Your vivid descriptions captivated me and then your storytelling skills heated up the rest for a delicious treat.
I like the subtle approach of how the topic is unfolded in your story. There is very strong imagery, and I like the way how the story unfolded. I also appreciate the message it carries. Lovely job.
I'm glad pumpkins don't grow on trees either. Great story!
Wonderful imagery in this delightful and imaginative story! A powerful truth that our Heavenly Father knows best and we best stick with His designs! Great job!
I enjoyed the descriptions and pace of the story, very thorough and deliberate. Good writing!
Congratulations on EC for a beautiful piece.
Hey, congratulations Noel, yet again! Great story. I loved it.
Congratulations Noel, on your level and EC wins! I am so glad this imaginative piece got a deserved win!
Congrats Noel on your EC placement. Very much deserved.

Wing His Words

:) I loved the mental image of pumpkin vines cascading through oak trees with dangling orange orbs. I was thinking of trying this until I finished reading. :) Super work on this story that exalts our Master Designer! Congrats on your Editor's Choice award!