The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah, I love the way your title figured into this. I like Max. Felt a little sad for him at the end, but this was a fun read. I had to chuckle by the time I understood where you were headed with this. I loved the second tent, where his wife filled up the second room with all of her clothes. Very nicely done.
As a life-long camper, I loved the progression of tents. As a loner who is also a spoise and a grandparent to 13 I loved the last stanza especially.
07/27/13
What a well written, lighthearted, contemplative, fun read! Max’s tents expanded and retracted to the beat and breaths of life! Wonderful vision in this! Loved it.
08/01/13
Congrats. God bless~
08/01/13
Congrats on your EC placing.
08/01/13
CONGRATULATIONS MELANIE on your well deserved EC placing for this charming story!
08/01/13
This is delightful! Congrats on your placement! Good job, Melanie. God bless!
08/01/13
Loved every word but especially 'that frightening hormone cloud.' A fun read. Congratulations.
08/01/13
Oh how I enjoyed this! Smiled all the way through. Great job and congratulations.
08/01/13
This is a unique and lovely entry. Congratulations on your well deserved EC!