The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/17
We had a cow that had triplets but I can't remember is they all make it or not. I think the cow puts so much into the calves before birth, that she doesn't have much milk to feed them.

I like how you relate it to the newborn Christian who needs to be bottle feed until them can get into the meat of the Word. Blessings, LaVonne
Instead of the first comma in the first sentence, I would have put the word "that".

There were two phrases that I just read it my way of thinking. The first phrase that I changed was "for a long period of time" I read it as "for any length of time".

Another place I put this phrase in "appears to be doing very well.

In high school I was a "city" (actually a small town of 350 people) FFA member. I raised chickens and rabbits. The hardest thing for me was to try to "judge livestock". They all looked good to me.

Thanks for bringing back some memories.