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By Katie Sherrill
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***************************************** A ****************************************
**************************************** Flash ***************************************
*************************************** Of light ***************************************
************************************* Star light star ************************************
*********************************** Bright, shining over *********************************
******************************* Bethlehem tonight, I wish *******************************
**************************** I could let the whole world know ****************************
********************** That He came to this earth to let His light show. **********************
************** If I could say it with words, would you even hear? Would you stop ************
*********** Long enough or run fast with fear? He came to this earth to touch your hearts *********
***** Of stone. He came to this earth so you wouldn’t be alone. But you want to live your lives******
**How you want to live. Believing in promises that weren’t yours to give. Still you are lonely, lost and ** ********* Afraid. You fill up the voids with things that you made. Yellow star sitting high, way *******
************** Up in the sky. You speak so loudly yet we just pass you by. Some have ************
************** Noticed but never ask what...what must we do, we just stay in our rut. ************
************************ How sad you must be as you watch us pass by. **********************
************************* You have the answers, He holds the key, but **********************
*************************** We don’t want to offend so we pretend ************************
******************************** Not to see. We don’t see til’ ****************************
*********************************** It’s convenient for us *******************************
************************************** To complain. **********************************
*************************************** Then we *************************************
**************************************** Search *************************************
***************************************** For a **************************************
***************************************** Way ***************************************
***************************************** To ***************************************
***************************************** Give ***************************************
***************************************** Him ****************************************
**************************************** All the ***************************************
**************************************** Blame. *************************************
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