The Official Writing Challenge
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First of all I would suggest spacing between paragraphs; then perhaps it wouldn't have been so difficult to know which one was talking; Perhaps I'm the only one confused here, but I also didn't get the meaning of "branching"; but I believe there's a good point here - and thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
I see a good story here, but it seemed to be too much, too quick. Good thoughts and a good message.
In Nigeria, the English Language has evolved and now has some elements of Nigerianism. Branch means 'stop over'.
I know it's a fellow Nigerian who submitted this entry. It would be better if you eliminate all types of Nigerian English as it is not internationally acceptable. Also, space your paragraph for better reading. Keep on writing.