The Official Writing Challenge
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A good story and a well written piece. Your dialogue was very natural and flowed well. It's awesome how he was able to use his injury to share God with others. Well done.
Congratulations, wonderful story!
Congratulations Bonnie, this is a wonderful story.
Cngratulations, you made EC! Yippee! This is delightful, Bonnie! I like the way you sandwiched the flashback between the precious dialogue with Grampa and grandson. The end was particularly strong . . . Humorously pointed lesson. Great stuff--looking forward to more from you!