The Official Writing Challenge
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Very visual--great characters! Watch out for the spelling of "perish." I wonder how often such exchanges occur around us...
Like the way you unfolded the identities of the characters. You kept me wondering till the end. Good job!
Very enticing read. You kept me interested to the end and provoked a lot of thoughts.
I wasn't sure where it was going and once I figured it out I was hooked, drawn into the conversation.
It is good to know our "Master" is watching, taking care and defending us before and after our salvation. Wonderful job. I loved it. Blessings Brenda
Great description - I could see every detail in my mind's eye, and the story was VERY engaging. Definitely made me think about what may be going on right in front of us!
Very good read. Great description. Good job.
Excellent story, well written and creative. I really enjoyed it.