The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me think. At first I thot it was just about a disaster and I didn't see the connection to the cross...then I got. Oh! Yea! Nice parallel! Good job!
This is a marvelous way to visualize the "cross to bridge the great divide." Would be super as a teen devotional, accompanied by that song.
I worked to make the connection, but I got it. Powerful emotions. Your "humongous" threw me. I haven't heard that word in ages! LOL Wonderful feeling of peace at the end.
Powerful images. It took me a while to figure out what was happening, but this is a great read.