The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
LOL! So funny! I was floating right along there and loved the interruption!! Very good!!
06/22/06
Delightful! Love the cross-legged dog, and lots of the daydreamy images. Really cute.
Loved it! You took me on a grand voyage through the suds, with vivid, romantic descriptions that perfectly set the mood for the final popping of his bubble! Thanks for reminding us how to dream big--this one goes past the humor and percolates into the spirit. Oh, for the heart of a child...Great piece!
06/26/06
Dreaming big in the tub or the shower never hurt any of us... inspired things can be born there...

Colourful, delightful...
Such an enjoyable read. You captured the heart of a dreamer. Good job.
06/26/06
I personally liked the 'artstic self' dream. :)

A great one to read and enjoy! (which I did!)
06/27/06
Best writing I've read yet! A DAVEY winner for sure!
One question, however. How did you know me that well?