The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this dialog, and how you jolted me with the words of Jesus, that He even knows the number of hairs on our head! Of course, I am familiar with that scripture reference, but I hadn't made that connection even with the name of the hair salon. You are a good writer! And I love finding such a brilliant surprise when I'm reading. :)
Wonderful job with the topic, great delivery and content. I loved this entire read, well done.

Beautiful writing style.

This is a creative piece. Hair for Him. I like it.
I like how you told a story within a story! that's not easy to do!