The Official Writing Challenge
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Point well made. Good job!
Very good writing and a reminder about what is important: people, not things.
This was so well done. I felt a trickle of fear and a need to pull on the shield of faith. A great reminder to stay alert!
Wow! And double Wow!! This is fantastic! A great job - I just loved it! One that stays with you and will not be forgotten. A message so clear yet done so creatively. I hope it places!
Nothing to say but---perfection.
A well written reminder that home is a place to nurture relationships.
Excellent reminder of how we can be vunerable when we turn our back on things that matter. Well done.
I loved this. Absolutely awesome. Well done.
Chilling -well done!
Great work, as always. Definately a contender this week. The only thing I didn't like about the piece was that it was just a touch cliche. Wealthy and miserable. Drunk mom, work-a-holic dad. BUT, there is such a ring of truth to it that it works... and does so strongly!
Ugh ... this makes me shudder ... which is a compliment to the writer. Well done. But ... ugh!
WOO HOO!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS! I knew it was good ... and boy, is it good! Even if it does make me shudder still!
Let me add congrats to my previous comments! I told you it was a contender! Well deserved win! :-)
Wow! What an awesome protrayal of what the devil really wants to do to us! And what we let him do! Congratulations!
Well done Lynda, you definitely deserve this win.
My #1 choice of the week!:) Congratulations, Lynda! The prowler was scary and real, your vignettes of family life were believable. Great job!
OOOOOOHHHHH... I liked it, a lot. :)
Great description of the 'prowler' and the family.
And a lesson to be learnt too! Well done.
Fantastico! Stupendous! So glad this piece won a Place in the Sun! Magnifico! Just great writing, great story and Perfection Personified! Kudos!