The Official Writing Challenge
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Perhaps I'm an old "softie"; not perhaps...I know I'm an old Softie, so I unabashedly wept through your story. So inspiring, so well written, and so touching! God bless!
It's beautiful! (I read you first because of your title...I love the sea)
You have a gift for both dialog and description. A vivid, evocative story. Well done!
I love this. I love the way that you describe how each one of us can be like Paul and minister just by opening our mouth. :D
Great story.
This is very highly polished. A most talented writer. Could be published anywhere... and I hope it is! We'll likely see this in the winners circle, me thinks! Congrats on a great piece!
This was great, nice and subtle, no over preaching, and you too the time to clean out any errors before submitting it.
Wow. I loved this, just loved it. The witty lines like, 'Glancing at the bottles, the man said, Dont suppose you come to pray?' add so much. Well done!
Powerful, but in a gentle way! Enjoyed the image of water and the "work" of the waves.