The Official Writing Challenge
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Phew for sure! Don't like mines or caves and your story proves my poing. However, I love the parellel of God riding down the slide with us. No need to fear!
I had to laugh a couple of times at some of your descriptions, especially about the look of terror on your face. I still wondered about what was the attraction of these salt mines besides the slides, what did you see? I enjoyed the anaology also. Good job.
Wow! I hope there was something down there that made the trip down the various slides worthwhile. The entry was very descriptive... I could see it like I was there on he slide with you. (I would have been terrified, too!)

So glad we have a loving Savior who rides the scarey slides of life with us!

Well written, and very enjoyable.

Thanks by the way for your kind words about my entry.