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I like the way you showed -not told in your stry. It flowed well.
This was too cute! I loved the ending.
I agree that you told the story well. Good action.
A fun read. Good use of the topic. Nice ending.
The Italian characteristics come through in this clever story!
Cute, funny, entertaining and great character study with the uncle. Enjoyed it very much!
Loved the ending! Great story.
A very fun read! Watch your punctuation.
A lesson in never assuming anything..."Purple beaked" now that is funny. Nice and creative take on the subject.
"Grape" little story! I enjoyed the read.
Really good characterization of the Italian uncle. Cute ending, too. This was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful pacing!
Patricia, I'm going to feature this delightful story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of March 15. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!