The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
Very good!
05/21/09
Short, sweet, and to the point...well written!
05/22/09
Creative and fun story that fit perfectly to the topic. I enjoyed every word.
LOL! Glad you got an "A" on it, whether this is fictional or not! It certainly deserved it! Super creative and a truly delightful read! loved it!
I am confused about this student's age-thought it was a kid until reading about the divorce paragraph. I can't think of a better way to describe "time" than the one you gave. Well done.
05/27/09
Very clever - well done.