The Official Writing Challenge
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I think this is interesting, meriting introspection. It was great how it started out with the baby being born into this life and having to deal with its troubles. Essentially, this work tells us as Christians this world is not our home. But we are here for a purpose, and that is to bring others to love and mercy of Christ. Good job.
I think this is interesting, meriting introspection. It was great how it started out with the baby being born into this life and having to deal with its troubles. Essentially, this work tells us as Christians this world is not our home. But we are here for a purpose, and that is to bring others the to love and mercy of Christ. Good job.
09/22/08
Interesting story. The birthing part was good. In two paragraphs it sounds contradictory, pain and torture since birth, and in the following paragraph never knowing anything but joy, never knowing pain. I know there can be joy through hard times because Jesus is there, but I'm not sure you meant this. Keep writing.
10/18/08
Just the tip of the iceberg. There is so much more to this than meets the eye! Eventually it will all come out!