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Absolutely beautiful! God bless!
This is beautifully poetic. I loved the HOW? sentences at the beginning, they really burned the images into my mind.

Nice writing!
Aren't we so thankful that He was willing. Beautifully done.
Beautiful entry, Sally. Somehow reading all the GREAT work that didn't place gives me more peace about my own lack of success. I love this piece. You are a wonderful writer and a terrific cyber-friend. I'll bet if you try, this article will find a home elsewhere.
I just read this too, and have to agree with Deb - this might not have placed, but not because it is not up to snuff! The bar has risen so high in the past few months, that the space between winners and the others comes down to personal choice by the judges.

Yours truly was a lovely piece, and I agree, you should find a place to get it published.

I have to agree wholeheartedly with Corinne and Debbie! A beautiful piece of work! Left me with that WOW feeling. We should all be incredibly humbled that He was willing - for our sakes! God bless, Cheri
Oh Sally, what a perfect love story. Written only by one who has been to that special place with our Lord.
Oh wow, Sally, I can really see your heart for God in this piece! Wonderful!