The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh how true! And how beautiful! One to read again and again! Just beautiful!
Oh, how beautiful indeed! What a creative and worshipful image--our clean heart, His home! I especially love the image of the Lord cleaning the windows. This poem is a lovely picture of what Christ does in our hearts when we let Him! Outstanding!
You know what I thought of immediately in response to reading this? I Peter 1:16: "Be holy, because I am holy." God's holiness is something so huge that we can't begin to get our hands around it...and yet we are privileged to be called to be holy as well. You did a great job of saying that in your poem - bravo!!!
Another wonderful and touching poem. What a great way to worship!
Very good - especialy appropriate for the new year. You have constructed this well, the feeling of it carries it beautifully and gives it a momentum. Lovely. God bless.