The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/16
Suspense and a surprise ending. Very good.
Well written an an enjoyable read. The ending left me hanging though, wondering why people were being held captive and the police were not involved?
05/26/16
Suspenseful and well done.

Blessings~
05/26/16
Congratulations! The pace and imagery made this a delightful read.
05/26/16
Congratulations, Raymond, on winning 2nd place in the Intermediate Category. That story held me captive throughout.
05/26/16
Congratulations on your 8th place EC award. This story was well deserving of the honor.
06/15/16
Nicely conceived and written and suspense tale with a superb surprise ending.