The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/16
Good devotional. I think they say we shouldn't begin with a dictionary definition.
05/15/16
Well done, authentic in delivery and content. I really liked it.

Blessings~
05/17/16
Very clear devotional, and I like your closing poem - though I didn't realise that's what it was at first. Perhaps to place it in italics, or setting the left margin further in might help.
05/19/16
I enjoyed reading your devotional and poem.

I would delete the first paragraph because it took me off course.