The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
Good content that would be easier to read if you double spaced between your paragraphs. I've been reminded of that several times myself.
09/15/09
I agree about the spaces particularly as the content is factual. A good "textbook type" description of childhood maybe some examples and descrptive parts would lighten it a bit? But maybe there is merit too in have a more scholarly approach to the subject.