The Official Writing Challenge
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A moving story, well written. Thank you.
This is a precious, surprising story. Well done.
This was such a beautiful story. I was mezmerized and my heart ached for Trace. Thank you for such a tender loving story.
Lovely work, well written, very touching.
Your writing is very good! The first half especially grabbed me. Excellent entry!
Yes, this is very good writing! You have an interesting story and you made me care about your characters and their circumstances.
I thought this was very captivating. I was suprised that the mother had just left, I thought she had died. I also liked the was the you did not make Trace's disability the forfront, it was just a reality. Good job!